Monday, September 10, 2012

Leo Topic Assignment: Parts of a Paper

I chose parts of a paper to research for this blog. I thought this was a good topic because if you do not have the proper parts of your paper, then it will not be totally correct. The three sections of the paper Leo put online are the introduction, thesis statement, and the conclusion. I will talk about each one in this presentation.

First off is the introduction.

“Introduction: the first paragraph (or paragraphs) of any written work”

An introduction captures your audience's attention, gives background on your topic, develops interest in your topic, and guides your reader to your thesis. There are three basic ways to write an introduction. You can write the introduction after you write the body of your essay. You can write the introduction before you write the body of your essay. You can rough out the introduction first and then focus and revise it once you have written your essay. But there is no single right form for an introduction to take. The introduction begins with a broad statement about the main idea. This statement might suggest background or the general category to which the thesis idea belongs. The next sentences are more specific, moving closer to the actual thesis of the essay. The final sentence of an introduction often contains a fairly specific version of the main idea.

                Next will be the thesis statement. A thesis statement is an assertion, not a statement of fact or an observation. It takes a stand rather than announcing a subject. A thesis is also the main idea, not the title. It must be a complete sentence that explains in some detail what you expect to write about. They are narrow, rather than broad. If the thesis statement is sufficiently narrow, it can be fully supported. A thesis statement is specific rather than vague or general. It has one main point rather than several main points. More than one point may be too difficult for the reader to understand and the writer to support. You can revise your thesis statement whenever you want to while you are writing your essay. Writers often discover what their real purpose and point is in the process of putting their thoughts into words and then reading what they have written.

                And finally the conclusion, conclusions are often the most difficult part of an essay to write, and many writers feel that they have nothing left to say after having written the paper. A writer needs to keep in mind that the conclusion is often what a reader remembers best. Your conclusion should be the best part of your paper. A conclusion should do three things, stress the importance of the thesis statement, give the essay a sense of completeness, and leave a final impression on the reader. A strategy for writing a conclusion is echoing your introduction, it is meant to bring the reader full-circle. If you begin by describing a scenario, you can end with the same scenario as proof that your essay was helpful in creating a new understanding.

Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Weakest/Strongest Author


My Weakest Author

 

                Our class had to read all of the Story-in-a-Box submissions and had to rate them from zero to ten, ten being the best and zero being the weakest. I rated one of the stories I read a zero because it was hard to understand and the grammar was improper.  “I think learn countries can learn from a lot of crafts” (1) this was a quote from this person’s short story. And second it was kind of boring to read at parts as well, “My first stop is China. Chinese people are very friendly and sitting next to me on the train.” (2) I like to visualize what I am reading and I just could not do it with this writing. This one just suffered with spelling, grammar, and just the blandness of the paper.

 

(1)    http://yifuchen.blogspot.com/ Sept. 4, 2012

 

 

My Strongest Author

 

Our class had to read all of the Story-in-a-Box submissions and had to rate them from zero to ten, ten being the best and zero being the weakest. I rated one of the stories a nine because it was very well written and good grammar. “After, she went to Italy. There was a beautiful exhibition of ceramic pots and glass.” (1) I think this is a great example of good grammar and very well written. And secondly was pretty fun to read because I could put myself in the paper and could see myself in it. “A wooden sculpture of a bald woman stunned her as this sculpture trying to say something with its eyes.” (2) is a prime example of being in the paper. Overall this was a very well written paper it had great spelling, grammar, and I could put myself into the writing and thought I was there!

 

(1)    http://elenaen191f12s28.blogspot.com/ Sept. 4, 2012

Monday, September 3, 2012

Story with 13 things


There was a man name Dave, he was from Peru and had a drum. He went to Kenya and met a guy by the name of Henry. They became best friend after a little while of talking and decided to travel the world together fist they wanted to see how tall they were, so they bought a wooden ruler and measured their height, one of them was six foot one and the other was five foot nine. Then they decided to go to Germany, and there they found a wooden head. At first they were all creeped out about it, but after a while it kind of grew on them.
Next they went to china and they wanted to send a post card back to their families, so they ventured out and they found an old general store where they bought a Chinese stamp made of marble. They thought it was the coolest thing they have ever laid their eyes on. So they brought it back to where they stayed for that week and began writing letters. And then miraculously three chestnuts appeared and a voice said, “I will grant you three wishes and with every wish you will lose a chestnut.” So they started to think and they decided they would travel some of the world with them.
They wished to go to Mongolia first because they have always wanted a Mongolian wallet. So, POOF, they were in Mongolia and one of the chestnuts disappeared. Dave bought a Mongolian wallet and it seemed kind of heavy for just a regular wallet, and Henry thought so right away, he opened it up and found some coins in there. They had no idea what country they were from, so they started asking around, they soon found out the coins were from Singapore. After that they wished to go to Spain. One of the chestnuts disappeared again. Now they were down to just one wish left. In Spain they wanted to stay kind of away from the towns so they found a farm and asked if they could stay there, the woman said yes and gave them a two hundred year old blanket that they thought was amazing. And in, where they were staying they found this small pot and it said “Gozo”. They asked if they could have it to put things in and the generous lady said sure why not.
After they were done there they decided to use their last wish to go see Native Americans. And the last chestnut was gone. And there they stayed with the Acoman tribe. And Dave and Henry really wanted to go canoeing so they rented a canoe from one man on a river and they went out canoeing for a day. After they got done there they were very hungry so they decied to go into a restaurant and eat there they only used the finest of dishes. The plate was a reservation plate, and all the silverware was hand carved. After they got done with all of their touring they decided to go home to their families after about three years out adventuring. So they went home and are still sending cards to each other and using the Chinese stamp to mail it across.  

Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Inventory List

1. 200 yr old cloth
2. Wood canoe (native american)
3. Ruler
4. Mongolian wallet
5. German carved head
6. Acoman reservation plate
7. Singapore coins
8. Spanish farm model
9. 3 chesnuts
10. Chinese stamp carved from marble
11. Peru man with drum
12. Kenya Masai statue
13. Gozo small pot

Who am I


My name is Nicholas Ruhland, but everyone calls me Nick. I was born in Fergus Falls and raised in Battle Lake, which is a small town; about five hundred and fifty people live in this town. My parents got a divorce and I was the only one out of four that stayed in the small town and lived with my dad. This is where I developed all of my interests.  I love to hunt, fish, play golf, football, and just be active. I also like to hang out with my friends and just kind of relax when I hang out with them. I hunt all kinds of game including deer, geese, ducks, and pheasants just to name a few. I have also gone to Colorado to go on an elk hunt, which was a great experience. I also enjoy watching football. My favorite team is the Vikings, yes, even though they have not been doing too well. My favorite player for the Vikings, and probably of all time, would have to be Adrian Peterson. He is one of my idols that I strive hard to be like, although I know I will never be as good as him, I can always push myself like he has over the years.